Wensis Aviles

            My second observation at the writing center was great i had got to work with ashly once more.Ashly encounter a low order essay.The essay was about how age makes you more experienced and the student seems to state her argument.Ashly read to herself didn't seem to find any error beside a missing comma. She ask the student what do you think you need to improve on and the student was able to show ashly. Ashly agreed and told her to add more details to what she will be adding and to make it broad.
        The student also wanted to know when its the right time to put commas but besides that everything seems nice and clear.